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- Ending the main body of the presentation
- Summary
- Conclusion
- Inviting questions
Tuesday, November 13, 2012
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My presentation contains the importance of tourism in economy in our country.*I’d like to end by emphasizing the main points *which are tourism economy impact after revolution.*I think we have seen that we should know the vitality of tourism on economy.*Let me just finish with a question if we don’t save our tourism,won’t somebody else? As Jim Fowler”The most powerful argument of all for saving open space is economics,in most states,tourism is the number two industry”.*Remember what I said at the beginning of my talk is day,well to know how tourism play a vital role after revolution on economy.*Sothat’s plan,now let ‘s go and put it into practise. That concludes my part , now I’d like to invite your comments.
ReplyDeleteTHanks for your ending Thouraya. It seems that you have forgotten the first part: ending the main body. Then your summary is too short, what is the main idea to remember from each part of the body? As far as the conclusion is concerned, choose only one of these techniques, not all of them... I hope this helps you to improve your work!
Deletemy presentation shows the conflicts of tourism and culture in Tunisia.
ReplyDeletei would like to close by two main ideas wich are the conflict of culture in front of religious though which is certainly impact's on the sector of tourism obviously after the revolution as the second point.
let me just finish by saying that A decline in tourism revenues took a large chunk out of the beleaguered Tunisian economy during the Jasmine revolution, but officials are hoping that post-revolution interest in a stabilized Tunisia will attract more travelers to the country.
and like i represent at the introduction that the tunisian culture and the tourism have a strong positive relation that encourage to invest and to improve what is failed laterly after the movements of revolution.
THanks for your ending Asma. It seems that you have forgotten the first part:ending the main body. I must say that your summary is not very clear... could you please reformulate it? I don't really see the logical link between the symmary and the conclusion, please clarify.... Finally, don't forget to invite questions...
DeleteWell, this brings us to the end of our presentation.We would like to thank you all for listening. Then, we would like to run through our main points again which are the influence of tourism in economy,social and cultural sector.Then,the role of tourism in Tunisia is very important so the government should encourage the investments to improve their economy.Finally,we will be happy to answer any questions you may have.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your ending Soumaya. It is well structured but you should develop more your summary.
DeleteAt the end of our presentation we would thank you another time for comming today. We would like to run on the importance of our topic and reinsist on the role of tourism in economy sector so we should together rebuilt it and try to conserve it's last image.Finally we are happy to receive your suggestions and answers your questions.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your work Hanen. You should improve it by developing the summary and the conclusion, they are too short.
DeleteI’m now nearing the end of my talk, i hope that you enjyoed the discussion, t was certainly a pleasure for me, i’d like to run through my pain points again, we startes by showing same statics of the touristical field’s sales in the last quarters, then we moved to share with you our vision which consist on developing a new system and make a progressive programs to involve our country in the international competition.
ReplyDeleteLast but not least, we finished, by providing same information and technics used by other countries to develop their touristical field and make it on top, wich we hope to catch it up.
Ladies and gentlemen’s, let me add please, small lines, our position in the world allow us to progress and keep on progression, I guaranty that it you accept our vision, we will bring you more investments and more profits, we can balance the all finance institution by working on this field.
Now, as , I recommend to arrange meeting and a lot of sessions, there we involve must of the workers in, we can explore our techniques of communication, and become more patient for our work.
Ladies and gentelmens, unfortunately, we are running out of time, that’s it for today. If there are any questions, please feel free to ask.
Thanks a lot for posting your ending! It is well structured as the 4 parts are included but I think the paragraph starting with "Ladies and gentlemen’s, let me add please..." is useless. Finally, please check your spelling and your grammar.
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ReplyDeleteOK,I think that's every things i wanted to say on my explanation of this important topic.Thank you all for your listening and your attention ,i would just to summarize the main points of my talk the are a big problem threaten the banking system and specially in social issues and international relationship after the revolution ,as a conclusion to all this we need to found a solution and fail the gaps to save this fields
Thank you for this ending group 21!! I'd advise you to develop your summary, you must emphasize the most important ideas you want your audience to remember. Be careful, you have forgotten to invite questions at the end. Please check your spelling and your language...
ReplyDeleteFATMA GHARBI , karima swid , rim jridi
ReplyDeletei would like to end by emphasizing the main points which are ; the tourism in tunisian desert ,the characteristics of tourism in douz , in "ksar ghilan" .
IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR QUALITY NEW YEAR'S HOLIDAY AND ESCAPE FROM THE DAILY GRIND OR JUST WISHING TO CHILL OUT FOR THE WEEK END YOU CAN FIND IN THE TUNISIAN SAHARA DESERT, THE PERFECT PLACE TO RELEASE AND ENJOY MAGNIFICANT LANDSCAPE OF ENDLESS DUNES OF SAND.FINALLY ,IF THER IS SOMETHING UNCLEAR YOU CAN ASK AND I WILL BE HAPPY TO ANSWEAR IT
Thanks for your ending! But you have forgotten to end the main body of your presentation first.. Your summary is too short, you must make sure the audience remembers the most important ideas. I can't really see a concluding part either...
ReplyDeleteBassma Hfidhi/Saoussen Souissi G2
ReplyDeleteWell,this brings us to the end of our presentation.We would like to thank you all for your interested my topic.I would like to finish with restating the three main points which are the effect of tourism in economic and social sector.Then,we end with explaining the way that makes Yasmine Hammamet a source of pleasure.I think we have seen the vital role of tourism in all aspects.Let me just finish with a question if you have.
wassim sbika G2
ReplyDeleteThis brings me to the end of my presentation , Thank you all for your listening and your attention,i would just to summarize the main points of my talk the definition of these Phenomenon ‘’soil erosion’’, its risks and some possible solutions. * In my introduction, I said we would be concentrating on solutions to the Soil erosion and the perfect and easy one is ‘’ it is best for state to start plans as planting strong trees in a process as quickly as possible to maintain the integrity of the soil underneath it and to decrease the erosion’’. Now that we have reached the conclusion, I hope that you'll all agree then that we cannot rest on past achievements.
Thank you for being so attentive. I'd like to give you the chance to express yourselves now. If you have any questions or would like to have some points clarified, please feel free