Now that you have chosen your topic, you can write your introduction and post it below.
You can find a reminder of the different parts of an introduction HERE
Do not forget to indicate which group you belong to. (due November 2, 2013)
To post your introduction, just click on 'Comments' and write your text in the box.
Hello every one! It’s a pleasure to welcome you today, let us introduce our selves: MARWA HAJJEM, JALILA RAHAL, AMAL MECHI, and ITAF TOUATI.
ReplyDeleteWe are as 3rd year Business English students and Belong to the second group,
Of Higher Institute of Laguages in Gabes (TUNISIA)
Today’s topic is the last « Flood » in In Drahem caused by « the melting snow ». So, how are we going to deal with this issue ?
So, how are we going to deal with this issue ?
Our topic is very important for you because many people were affected by « the huge losses ».
Our presentation will focus on three major parts.
The first will be looking at the factes/causes, the second is about the consequences and third the solutions to this problem.
Our presentation won’t take more than 15 minutes, don’t worry about taking notes, we have put all the important statistics on handout for you.
If you have any question feel free to interrupt us at any time.
Thanks for posting your introduction! Good work! But be careful, you have repeated the sentence "So, how are we going to deal with this issue ?" and made a few language mistakes. Try also to add an attention grabber....
DeleteHi, every one, its a pleasure to welcome you today. As you know we are your friends MOHAMED ALI HNID,NISSAF HAMED,and IBTISSSEM JLIDI. Today we are going to discuss with you one of the most dangerous issue in our country caused by air pollution which is very allergic to you.
ReplyDeleteWe've to divided into three major parts; Introducyion, Body and Conclusion.
This presentation will take about twenty minutes and please feel free to ask questions at any time during our talk.
In the Introduction we will start by defining the environmental issue including deseases caused by air pollution.
Environmental pollutants as toxic chemicals of human origin in air,food,water, and communities.
Envirnmental pollutants and desease in Tunisian people: estimates of morbidity,mortality, and costs for lead poisoning,asthma, concer and developmental disabilities.
Thanks for sharing your work on the blog! But you still need to improve your introduction because it lacks clarity. First we don't know exactly what is the topic that you have chosen tot deal with. Second, it is not well structured and some parts are missing.
DeleteHello everyone first of all let us thank you for coming here today we are glad that many of you could come,especially since we know this time of the year is probably the busiest for you.For those who don't know us our name's are;Bel Habib Rawdha,Agrebi Manel,Akari Aida,Dghim Asma we are four Ecological Experts.
ReplyDeleteToday we would like to up date you on the causes and effects of water pollution in Tunisia, in our presentation we would focus on three major issues: Point one deals with the definition and types of water pollution then we will move to point two which is about the causes and effects of water pollution finelly we will end with some sollutions to prevent water pollution.
Our talk should take about 30 minute to cover these issues,don't worry about taking notes,we will email the presentation to you.After our talk, there'll be time for a discussion and any questions.So let us start by asking you a question: to what extent does water pollution effects our life,?well we are here to tell you why.
Thanks a lot for sharing your introduction! Good work! It's well structured and clear. But you have forgotten to explain why this topic is important for the audience .... Maybe, you could also correct the few spelling mistakes you have made...
DeleteHello everyone first of all let us thank you for coming here today.we are glad that many of you could come ,especially since i know this time of the year is probably the busiest for you.
DeleteFor those who don't know us ,our names are BEL HABIB RAOUDHA,AKKARI AIDA,MANEL AGREBI and ASMA DGHIM.
Ok,we are four Ecological Experts.
Today ,we would like to update you on the causes and effects of WATER POLLUTION IN TUNISIA.
Our topic is of particular interest to those of us who are involved in this field because the water pollution is very harmful to humans,animals and water life.
The effects can be catastrophic depending on the kind of chemicals legally or illegally dumped by manufacturing industries ,health centers ,schools and market places ,concentrations of the pollutants and where there are polluted .
In our presentation we will focus on three major issues;
Point one deals with definition and types of water pollution .Then we will move to point two which is about the causes and effects of water pollution.We will end with some solutions to prevent water .
Our talk should take about 30 minutes to cover these issues.
Don't worry about taking notes ,we will email the presentation to you.
After our talk,there will be time for a discussion and any questions .So let us start by asking you a question.To what extent does WATER POLLUTION effects our life? Well,we are here today to tell you why.
Thank you for your efforts to improve your work!
DeleteHello everyone, we are delighted that so many of you could make it today.
ReplyDeleteLet us just start by introducing ourselves for those who don't know us:My name is Fitouria and my colleagues are Mabrouka and Ameni, we are third year Business English students at the ISLG.
Suppose that you are the head of recycling company do you take on consideration the environment issue?
Thinking about it!! Don't worry about this,our topic will gives you an idea.
Today we are going to talk about recycling as an important issue in Tunisian companies.This topic is of great importance for us as business students especially for those who want to start their own business.
We have devided our presentation into three main points:
The first point deals with recycling as a major factor of business's success in Tunisia,
The second point speaks about the different types of recycling in tunisian companies.
And in the third points we will be looking at, which is the company's approach that be used to improve their business in order to save the environment.
Our presentation should take 20 minutes to cover this points, we will handing copies of our presentation at the end of our talk. Please feel free to ask questions at any time during our talk.
Thanks for this well-structured introduction. You could improve it by correcting some language msitakes and by rewording the attention grabber (question).
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ReplyDeleteHello, it’s such a delight for me Amani Antoul, Khawla Abdeloinisse, Fatma Abdi, and Asma Bouchlaka, students of third year Business English, Groupe 1
ReplyDeleteTo argue with you this morning the notion of ‘‘Environmental Terrorism’’. What is important that it's not nearly as visible an effect which attracted us to dive into the negative impact of this strange phenomena that has recently spread its dark shadows over our country.
In this presentation we are going to reach the following three points;
Negative effects of Terrorism in the Environment.
Its results.
Expectations about our Environment future beneath these monster digits.
This may lead us to take from 20 to 30 minutes, so please feel free to ask us whenever you want.
You are all aware about reflections that the tragedy of the recent terrorist attacks have been to our society, and we are sure that you have had your own part of this dilemma speaking about the bad performance of the temporary government which may be the direct reason that cost us the lives of countless personnel who will be always remembered as heroes.
In the clamor of these remembrances, there is one voice that is silent, Mother earth.
sorry for these unconscious mistakes:
DeleteGroup1, 'to argue' with you ...
the recent terrorist attacks have been 'caused 'to our society...
the direct reason that 'costs' us the lives ...
Thanks for this introduction, which is well-structured. But unfortunately I think you will have to change your topic as it is not really related to environmental issues (concerns related to the natural environment)
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Deletesorry miss but nature is a part of the environment isn't ? so why we have to change our topic i don't understand ?!
DeleteWell, you really have to clarify what you mean by ‘‘Environmental Terrorism’’ then... Could you be more specific, please?
Deletethis point of view was expected miss because you're not the only one who told us that our topic is not clear, may be because it is a new concept..what i'm asking for is a new chance miss because I'm 100% sure that this big question mark will disappear when you read the body...please wait til the body reveal every thing for you...
DeleteGood afternoon Ladies and Gentelmen. First of all, let us thank you for coming here today. For those of who dont know us, our names are LAGHMANI KHADIJA et HALA TELMOUDI who are the students of third year English Business. We are going to talk to you today about a big disaster which is the pollution. In our presentation, we will focus on three major issues; First, we will looking at the reasons of pollution. Then, we will move to talk about the consequences and we will end with some solutions to avoid this dangerous problem. Our talk should take 20 minutes. Please feel free to interrupt us at any time if you have any questions.
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting your introduction but a few parts are missing, So, could you find them and complete you rintroduction please?!
DeleteGood morning Ladies and Gentelmen let us thank you all for coming here today. We like firstly to introduce ourselves : AZZIDI ZEINEB , AMAMI SOUMAYA and KHALTHOUM ALAYA we are a third year Buisness English students and belong to the first group.
ReplyDeleteToday, we choose to talk about an important topic related to Tunisian environment which is forest fires . We think that this presentation is important for us for protecting our natural ressources. We will focus on three major parts: first point deals with reasons ,second point deals with effectes, and third point deals with solutions.
To present our topic we want to take 25 minutes from your time, don't worry about taking notes because we've put all the important data on a handout we will give you by the end of course there'll be time for a discussion after my talk. Please we need your attention to start with......
Thank you for sharing your introduction. You can still improve it by correcting your language mistake, by developing the plan and adding some punctuation...
DeleteGammoudi Fatma- Jradi Mariem-Gnounou Chrifa-Gdiri Malek (Group 2):
ReplyDeleteHello everybody we're delighted that many of you could make it today. Let us introduce ourselves to you. We are Fatma, Mariem , Cherifa and Malak. We are third year Applied English at the Higher Institute of Languages Gabes. In our talk we would like to report on the poaching in Tunisia as an environmental crime. This topic is very paramount because it threatens the renewable natural resources and it menaces the biodiversity as a whole.
The aim of this presentation is to highlight the determinable effects of the illegal hunting on on biodiversity and the procedures to protect the environment.
We’ve divided our presentation into three major parts. We’ll start off by defining the concept of poaching. Then, we will move to inform you about its various categories.
At the end we will deal with the strategies taken by the government toward this harmful issue.
This won't take more than 20 minutes. Don’t worry we will be handing out copies of the slides at the end of our talk. If you have any questions feel free to ask at any time.
So what do you think, can the government handle out this issue?
have you an idea about the animals which are menaced to extinct???
Thanks for choosing this interesting topic. Maybe you could impore your work by changing the attention grabber, which is not very creative, and introduce it at the begining, before presenting the topic.
Delete• Fine, let’s get the ball rolling. Good morning everyone, I'd like to start by introducing myself. My name is Ibrahim khalil as all of you know I’m a business English student. I am very pleased and proud to introduce my colleagues …………..Today I'm going to talk about” Soil erosion”. I have chosen to speak about this because I know that most of you don’t have the perfect idea about what it can be my talk will last about 15 minutes. You may have wondered what soil erosion is. What I want my listeners to get out of my speech is to be lighting enough about this issue.
ReplyDelete• I have broken my speech down/up into 3 parts:
• In the first part I give a few basic definitions. In the next section I will explain In part three, I am going to show you how we can limit the dangerous of the “Soil Erosion” I'd ask you to save your questions for the end
(Group 2)
Thank you for sharing this introduction. You should improve it by restructuring it and by adding somme missing components....
DeleteGood morning ladies and Gentleman , first of all let me thank you all for coming here today.
ReplyDeleteLet us let me start by introducing ourselves, we are Marwa Hmouda, Mawaheb Hmouda and Akrem Moussa.
Today we are going to talk about home garbage in Tunisia, so we have divided our presentation in three major part.
We will start by discussing the causes of this phenomenon, then we will move on to some effect of this dilemma in our environment, and we will end with some solution to reduce the effect of this dangerous problem.
Our presentation should take 15 minutes to cover this issue, and don't worry about taking notes, we will email the presentation to you.
After our talk there will be time for a discussion and any question.
(Indian Pink Group)
Thanks a lot for your introduction. Could you explain why this topic is relevant for the audience and what is the purpose of this presentation? what do you mean by "dilemma"?
DeleteHello every one, It’s a pleasure to welcome you today. For those of you who don’t know us we are the Golden group (Basma El Mizouri and Massarrat Dallej) a third year Business English students. So let me start by asking you a question: What is done to protect environment in Gabes? Well we are here today to answer that question in our presentation, which is, the perseasure done to protect Gabes’ environment by the government and the society and what can we do in the future. Our topic is of particular interest to those of us who live here, to make our city a better place for living to our children, our future and to be aware that everything we do is important and effective. We’ve divided our presentation into three main parts. Point one deal with the perseasure done by the government to protect our environment, point two is what was the society role? And this point is divided into two parts; the first one is the role of the citizen and the second is the activist role. Finally, the last point is dealing with what can we do in the future?
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting your introduction! You can improve it by correcting language msitake, for example, what do you mean by "perseasure ". Moreover, some parts are missing at the end ...
DeleteSorry we mean by perseasure,procedures and we should say point one deals with .Instead of saying a better we shoud say a good place.Please could you tell us any parts are missed.
DeleteOk, thanks for the clarification! the structure is not very clear, there should be 3 parts;;; Then, what about the length of your presentation, how you will help the audience to remember the presentation and the questions policy?
Deletenew version of our introduction
DeleteHello every one, It’s a pleasure to welcome you today. For those of you who don’t know us we are the Golden group (Basma El Mizouri and Massarrat Dallej) third year Business English students. So let us start by asking you a question: What is done to protect environment in Tunisia? Well we are here today to answer this question. Our topic is of particular interest to those of us who live here, to make our city a better place for living and to be aware that everything we do is important and effective.We would like to update you on the procedures taken by the government to protect the environment and the role of the organizations and society in doing to. We’ve divided our presentation into three main parts. Part one deals with the procedures taken by the government to protect our environment, part two is about the role of the society : this part is divided into two parts: the first one is the role of the citizen and the second is the activist role. Finally, the last point is dealing with what can we do to guarantee more protection for our environment in the future? Our talk should take about 20 minutes. Please feel free to interrupt us at any time with questions. Well do you think that we really need effective strategies and procedures to protect and save our environment?
Your introduction is really very well structured, you have just forgotten to say how you will help the audience to remember the presentation, and you should correct the few language mistakes you have made...
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ReplyDeleteGood morning, ladies and gentlemen, it’s very nice to see you all here today. Let me introduce myself: my name is Wassim Sbika , I’m in the 3rd year Business English student and Belong to the second group
ReplyDeleteToday’s topic is a particular interest to those of us who don’t know about soil erosion, so I’d like to update you on this Phenomenon, its risks and some possible solutions.
First of all i would like to deal with the definition of these phenomenon “soil erosion’’, then very briefly go on to the risks of the soil erosion to environment and finally show you some possible solutions to decrease the risks of these phenomenon .
It should take about 20 minute to cover these issues, please don’t worries about taking notes we have put all the important date on a handout for you so feel free to ask questions during our presentation.
Thank you for trying to improve your introduction, it is much better! But before explaining why you topic is relevant for the audience, you should first introduce the topic. then, you should state the purpose of the presentation. And there are some language mistakes to be corrected too...
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ReplyDeleteHi,everyone,its a pleasure to welcome you today.As ;you know we are your friends:Mohamed Ali Hnid,Nisaf Hamed and Ibtisem Jlidi.Today, we are going to discuss with you one of the most dangerous issues in our country:"diseases" caused by air pollution which is very allergic to you.
we've devided our presentation into five major parts: the the first deals with the introduction which contains a general definition of the environmental pollutants linked to types of deseases in our country.The second is about types of diseases into which we've chosen just three of them such as "poisoning,asthma,and cancer".The third part deals with the side effects of each one.Number four deals with the ways of prevention of each type and finally number five deals with the conclusion.
This presentation will take about twenty minutes and please feel free to ask questions at any time during our talk.
To begin with the definition:"environmental pollutants as toxic chemicals of human origin in air,food,water,and communities."
"Environmental pollutants and disease in tunisian people:estimates of morbidity,mortality,and costs for lead :POISONING,ASTHMA,CANCER .
Thank you for posting a new version of your introduction, it is much better than the first one! But you can still improve it by explaining why the topic is relevant for the audience and what is the purpose of your presentation. Then, it is better to limit your presentation to 3 parts. The conclusion is not counted as a part of the body of your presentation. How will you help the audience to remember the main points of your presentation?
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ReplyDelete(another new version of our introdution)
ReplyDeleteHi, everyone,its a pleasure to welcome you today.As you know we are your friends:Mohamed Ali Hnid,Nisaf Hamed and Ibtisem Jlidi.Today,we are going to discuss with you one of the most dangerous issues in our country:"diseases" caused by air pollution which is very allergic to you.
We've devided our presentation into three major parts:the first deals with the types of diseases into which we've chosen just three of them such as ;"poisoning,asthma,and cancer".The second part is about the dangerous effects each one and finally number three deals with the ways of prevention.
This presentation will take about twenty minutes and please feel free to ask quetions at any time during our talk.
Thanks for improving your introduction. Here's some more advice: explain why the topic is relevant to the audience and what the purpose of the presentation is. How will you help the audience to remember your presentation?
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ReplyDeleteHello, it’s such a delight for me Amani Antoul, Khawla Abdeloinisse, Fatma Abdi, and Asma Bouchlaka, students of third year Business English, Groupe 1,to argue with you this morning the notion of ‘‘Environment and Terrorism’’.
Before I start , I’m going to take back to the tragedy of September 11th which you all aware about, but here it is what was hidden on you: When the Twin Towers were unexpectedly attacked on September 11th, all of lower Manhattan was enveloped in toxic dust clouds rising almost 1000 feet into the air. Thanks to drifting winds at the time of the attack, these dust clouds slowly moved south, choking the inhabitants Brooklyn and Staten Island, slowly depositing an unknown cocktail of gases and airborne particulates all over everything. This may not be the real intention behind the terrorist people; in fact, it is much more dangerous than their real one, that’s why we choose to dive into the negative impact of this strange phenomenon (terrorism) that has recently spread its dark shadows over our country.
In this presentation we are going to reach the following two points;
Negative effects of Terrorism in the Environment.
Expectations about our Environment future beneath these monster digits.
This may lead us to take from 20 to 30 minutes, so please feel free to ask us whenever you want.
Thanks for this new version of the introduction! But are you sure it includes all the parts required in the introduction? Moreover, I see a repetition here: the topic and the first part of the presentation are the same..... You should divide the body into 3 parts which present 3different ideas....
DeleteHello everybody, first of all, let me thank you for coming here today .I ‘m aware that you’re all busy preparing for the annual meeting this week, so I really appreciate you taking the time. For those of you who don’t know me my m*name is Rim Arabi /Raoudha Ben Amor as a student doing Business English .This morning I’d like to update you on the environnemental issues in Tunisia, more specific I’m working on WATER SCARCITY. The information I give you today should help you in order to know the importance of water. I’ve divided my presentation into three main parts, I’ll start off by showing you some photos of the places which suffer from water’s shortage in Tunisia and discussing its causes, then I’ll move on the consequences of water scarcity, I’ll end with some solutions as a remedy to this phenomenon. My talk should take about 30 minutes, please feel free to interrupt me at any time.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your work! Your introduction is well structured, you just need to explain how you'll help the audience to remember your presentation and to correct some language mistakes...
DeleteGood morning ladies and gentlemen, for those who don't know us , i 'am Takwa Hmid , and my colleagues are Aicha Hayder and Olfa Moomen ,we are third year Business English students belong to group 2 .
ReplyDeleteWhat we 'd like to talk about is ¨ clinical wastes¨ , our topic is very important for you because it deals with the impacts of clinical garbage on environment .The aim of this presentation is to show how to resolve this problem .
We have divided our presentation into three points :
Point one deals with the impact of ¨clinical wastes ¨ on environment in Tunisia .
Point two talk about the differences types of ¨ clinical wastes ¨
Last point explain how to face this problem? and we will mention the best solution must be followed .
Our presentation will take 20 minutes to cover this topic , don't worry about taking notes we will mail the presentation to you ,
after our talk there will be time for a discussion and any question.
Thanks for your introduction! Ther's only one missing part : you must attract the audience's attention. And please, correct your language mistakes.
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