Please remember that the conclusion should include the following parts:
- Ending the main body of the presentation
- Summary of the main points of your prsentation (what you want the audience to remember)
- Conclusion
- Inviting questions
Tuesday, November 12, 2013
THE ENDING
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As known every thing comes to the end, so does our presentation. What I want to be rooted in your minds are the two essential parts that I dealt with during my talk starting with: Negative effects of terrorism on the environment at the level of human and nature, and ending with: our Environment future beneath these monster digits at the level of human and nature as well. Now let’s test your attention by asking some questions .
ReplyDelete• Who is really paying the cost of terrorism?
• Who would be also affected except from nature and human and why?
(Golden group)
DeleteAs usual your ideas are original but I think that there is a missed part
its such a pleasure to hear that from you .. could you tell us which part is missing so we can add it please ..
DeletePlease summarize the main ideas of each part of the presentation, for example, what are the main negative effect? So, what is your conclusion? You have also forgotten to invite questions....
DeleteRight, that ends talk which about deforestation , so we’d like to finish with a summary of 3 mains points.
ReplyDeleteFirst the causes of this phenomen like the natural disaster (flood,storms…) , Second the consequences ,which is the extincution of some kinds of animals and trees , Finally the third point is about solutions like making strict rule that contribute to protect forests.
So , should be aware about the risks of deforestation , that people must be have an effectiv role to decrease the useless of forests at begin than the next step is the responsiblity of goverment to making seriously strategies and acheivement .
Now we have 15 min for questions and discussions .
( sarra chbil ; hajer cheria, kawther chebil belongs to group 1 )
Thanks! your ending is very well structured but you now need to improve the language....
DeleteAkkari Aida,bel Habib Rawdha,Agrebi Manel,Dghim Asma
ReplyDeleteWell,this brings us to the end of our presentation which is about the causes and effects of water pollution in tunisia .
I'll just run through the three different parts starting with the danger of this phenomenon .Then ,let's move to the main types of water pollution which are ;chemical water dirtyness ,biological pollution and macroscopic pollution.
Now let's focus on the causes of harmfulness of water which are related to indutrial waste ,domestic misuse and agricultural activities.
That is why the effects of this phenomena are essentially ;diseases ,distruption of food chain and destruction of ecosystem.
Finally ,the preventive practices include the duty of individuals to reduce the amount of dirty water that needs treatment .For the government ,it should make campaigns at schools for students.
Now let's make a real effort to achieve this goal.this can be only the result of peoples' role inside their home and organization outside by making people aware of the danger of water pollution in order to have a better attitude towards water.
So now,i'd be very interested to hear your comments and questions.
Well,that's all we wanted to say about what is done and what should be done in order to protect our environment.We would like to finish with a summary of the main points.The first one presented the government strategies and procedures to protect the environment in Tunisia.The second one dealt with the role of citizen and activist in protecting environment.We think that we have to make a clear plan and effective solutions to stop damaging our environment .So,it is time to make a real effort to achieve this goal.Now,we would be very intrested to hear your comments.(The golden group )
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DeleteThanks to you the golden group for sharing your ending! it is very well structured but I think you need to develop the summary a little bit more by telling us about the role of the government and of the Tunisian citizens.
DeleteThanks to Akkari Aida,bel Habib Rawdha,Agrebi Manel,Dghim Asma! Your ending is well structured, there's just a small issue with your using "let's" to talk about what you have presented... just change the tense ....
Deletehi mrs what is about the DES IT IS about what and when ?
ReplyDeleteWE WILL HAVE A PRESENTATION IN FRONT OF YOU OR NO?
AKKARI AIDA
Don't worry about the DS Aida, it will take place in January after the exams. I'll give you all the necessary information in class and I'll also post it on the blog in December.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot Mrs for your help and if you can give us such topics to prepare it in the holiday after the oral exam .
ReplyDeleteThe ending
ReplyDeleteWe are now nearing the end of our talk , we hope that you enjoyed the discussion , it was certainly a pleasure for us , we'd like to run through main points , we started by showing the impact of clinical wastes on environment ,then we classify the different types of clinical wastes , and last but not least we finished by giving some solution to this problem and we illustrate ¨ Galien Environment¨
as a company which take environment in its first considerations and it find beneficial solution to protect environment from ¨clinical wastes¨ .
What we need is to encourage launching new companies which will focus on environmental issues in Tunisia and now , let's make a real effort to achieve this goals .
Thanks for posting your ending! I advise you to briefly mention the main idiea in each part: for exemple, what are, in a few words, the main impacts of clinical wastes? And do not forget to invite questions at the end!
ReplyDeleteWell, this bring us to the end of our presentation. We would like to thank you all for listening, then we would like to run through our main points again.We started by explaining to you how Recycling can improve the business of tunisian companies.In this side we talked about the government and people's support to this kind of companies to develop their business.Also by reduce the cost of raw materials and so make more profits .Then we moved to share with you the different types of recycling companies in tunisia such as;IPEX which is specialized on plastic recycling and ELDAN recycling which is specialized on cable, aluminuim and WEEE ,and we finished by given you some methods that the recycling companies should be used to improve their businesses and save environment and this based on;Taking recycling lessons from professionals and by sponsor the environment association to encourage the society to treat environment friendly such as ; ELT which set laws , rules and policies.
ReplyDeleteSo, now we would be very interested to hear your comments and answer your questions.
(Zaab mabrouka , souissa Fitouria ,Trab Ameni)
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