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WHITE GROUP
ReplyDeleteHello everyone , thank you for being here .let me start by introducing my self my name is Maha and i am here with my colleague balsam .We are a third year applied English students from the higher institute of languages of Gabes ( ISLG) the vast majority of us are always on the lookout for ways to cut the amount of time we spend on mundane chores.aren't we?
And one of the ways online banking has helped free up our time is through the advent of online payment .
today's topic is online payment and this topic is of particular interest for you as business students who need to be up-to-date with such concept . And by the end of this presentation we will all understand the reasons beyond the emerging of online payment and it's importance on the economical wheels in Tunisia . In addition , we will provide indicators that will decrease the doubts and worries about automatic bills payment
we have divided our presentation into three main parts :AT first we willl define the term online payment .In the second section we will introduce the factors that help developing online payment .And in the third part we will talk about the situation of online payment in Tunisia
Our talk will take about 20 minutes .We will appreciate if you do not interrupt us. Please don't worry about taking notes .We will be handing out copies of the power point slides.
Thank you for posting your introduction White Group! Here is my feedback and a few questions.
DeleteAll the different parts of the introduction are included in your work, but to further improve it, please, take into account the following questions.
Who are you referring to saying “the vast majority of us”?
Whose “doubts and worries” are these?
Is the audience allowed to ask questions? When?
Moreover, mind the punctuation and there are some language and spelling mistakes that you can correct…
Balsam zaatouri
DeleteWHITE GROUP
Hello everyone , thank you for being here. Let me start by introducing my self my name is Maha and i am here with my colleague balsam. We are third year applied English students from the Higher Institute of Languages of Gabes ( ISLG) most of us as students are always on the lookout for ways to cut the amount of time we spend on mundane chores, aren't we?
And one of the ways online banking has helped free up our time is through the advent of online payment.
Today's topic is online payment and this topic is of particular interest for us as business students who need to be up-to-date with such concept. And by the end of this presentation we will all understand the reasons beyond the emerging of online payment and it's importance on the economic development in Tunisia. In addition, we will provide indicators that will decrease the doubts and worries about automatic bills payment.
We have divided our presentation into three main parts: At first we willl define the term online payment. In the second section we will introduce the factors that help developing online payment. And in the third part we will talk about the situation of online payment in Tunisia
Our talk will take about 20 minutes. We will appreciate if you do not interrupt us, there will be time for questions at the end of our presentation. Please don't worry about taking notes, we will be handing out copies of the power point slides.
Thanks for this update, it is better although you still have not answered my questions...
DeleteGreen group
ReplyDeleteGood morning, ladies and gentleman. It's pleasure to meet you all here today we appreciate your coming. Let us introduce ourselves we are Ines Assadi, Sondes Agrebi, Abir Bongui and Fatma Rezgui, third year Business English Students from the higher Institute of Languages of Gabes. Do you think that Islamic banks perform better than conventional banks? That's why we decided today to speak about Islamic banks and conventional ones in Tunisia. We will focus on three major parts.In the first part we give you an overview about Islamic and conventional banks. In the next section we want to show you the products offered by them. In the last part we would like to explain the similarities and differences between these banks. Our presentation will take 15 mn.
Please stop us if you don't understand anything we say, but could you keep any specific question until we've finished.
Do not worry about taking notes,we will e-mail the presentation to you.
Thank you for posting your work Green Group!
DeleteHere is my feedback:
The three following parts are not clearly expressed in your introduction.
• Getting the audience’s attention
• Introducing the topic
• Explaining why the topic is relevant for the audience
• Stating the purpose of the presentation
As far as the structure of your talk is concerned, there might be an overlap or repetition between part 2 and part 3: the products offered and the similarities and differences between these banks. I guess you are going to mention the products again… Maybe part 2 can be about similarities and part 3 about differences…
The rest seems fine, so keep up the good work!
Good morning everyone. It's a pleasure to meet you today. Let usintroduce ourselves. We are Mabrouka Bey and Siwar Bel Haj Yahya. Today, w'll be talking about financing small businesses in tunisia. As we know, our country is suffering from economic crisis so the state is unable to offer job opportunities. That's why we should think about personal business. And one of the most important steps of making one's project is financing. The perpose of our presentation is to make you aware about this stage. Our presentation is devided into three parts. W'll start by presenting the types of financing, then w'll move to difficulties of financing in Tunisia and w'll end by talking about the facilities of financing small businesses in our country. Our presentation will take about 15 minuts. If you have have any questions you can ask us after we end.
ReplyDeleteThank a lot for posting your introduction Mabrouka and Siwar !
DeleteHere is my feedback:
Find a way to attract your audience’s attention and explain why the presentation is relevant to the audience.
How will you help the audience to remember your presentation?
Instead of the term “personal business”, you should use “entrepreneurship” or “starting a new business”
Please correct language and spelling mistakes…
Keep up the good work!
Good afternoon everyone, we are grateful for having you here today. I'am Leila Maraoui and i'm here with my colleagues Marwa Lawchem and Wafa Mhenni we are third year applied English students from the Higher Institute of Languages of Gabes to talk about charitable finance as a solution for social problems in Tunisia .We manage to deal with charitable finance as a worldwide concept by taking the example of Grameen bank in the first part than in the second one we will discuss how can we implement such experience to decrease rates of poverty and joblesness in Tunisia .As you can see our topic is strongly relevant to your expectations wich is not only talking about issues but suggesting rational solutions that can be applied in the future and it will take 20 minutes ,we hope that you'll be attentive listeners and free to ask questions during the presentation.
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting your introduction Silver Group! Here is my feedback in order to improve it:
Delete• First, note that the exact term for your topic should be “charity finance” rather than “charitable finance”
• Try to include a strategy to attract the audience’s attention.
• Explain clearly the purpose of your presentation and why this topic is relevant for the audience.
• Tell us what the Grameen bank is, in a few words.
• I can see only 2 parts in the presentation while we expect 3 parts…
• How will you help your audience to remember this presentation?
• Edit this sentence “I'am Leila Maraoui and i'm here with my colleagues Marwa Lawchem and Wafa Mhenni we are third year applied English students from the Higher Institute of Languages of Gabes to talk about charitable finance as a solution for social problems in Tunisia”, it is too long, make 2 or 3 sentences out of it.
• This sentence is not clear and is not in the right position in your introduction: “As you can see our topic is strongly relevant to your expectations wich is not only talking about issues but suggesting rational solutions that can be applied in the future”
• Finally, make sure you check your language, spelling and punctuation
Good morning everyone.First of all, let we thank you all for coming here today.Let we introduce ourselves;We are 3rd year Applied English Students.The topic of our presentation is "Crowdfunding".By the end of this talk you will be familiar with crowdfunding.
ReplyDeleteThe aim of this presentation is to solve unemployment issue.
We have divided our presentation into four main parts: First, we will explain for you "How it works?". The second part will be about benefits and risks of crowdfunding. After that, we will move on to understand "How to make a successful crowdfunding planification?".
Finally, we will discuss the situation of crowdfunding in Tunisia. Our presentation should take about 20 minutes.Please feel free to interrupt at any time with questions.
PINK GROUP 2 nd try for the introduction
ReplyDeleteTopîc :Crowd Funing
Introduction
Helllo everyboddy,first of all let we thank you for being here today.For those who
don’t know us we are ;Adala Iteb,Ameri Manel and Soli Sana third year Business
English Students.
Today we would like to give you an overview about significant topic which is
‘Crowd Funding’this topic is relevant for those who look for financial sponsorship
For start up business.Our presentation aims at informing you about the different
procedures and aspects of this process, so we have devided our presentation into
four parts ;the first one will deal with the techniques of Crowd Funding,the second
part has to do with its advantages and risks ,the third will be about Crowd Funding’s
purposes and the last part will be dedicated for studying Crowd Funding in Tunisia .
Our presentation will take about 30 minutes and please don’t worry about handouts
We will provide you with the whole presentation by mail,questions and comments will
be discussed after we accomplish the presentation
Thank you for your introduction Pink Group, I see that you have chosen an original topic!
DeleteYour introduction includes all the necessary sections but you can also add a sentence to attract the audience’s attention.
I can see 4 parts in your presentation, try to reduce this to 3 parts so that it will be more balanced…
Finally, proofread your paragraph again in order to correct language, spelling and punctuation mistakes …
Keep up the good work!
Green group
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon ladies and gentleman. It's pleasure to meet you all here today we appreciate your coming. Let us introduce ourselves we are Ines Assadi, Sondes Agerbi, Abir Bongui and Fatma Rezgui third year Business English Students from the higher Institute of Languages of Gabes.
Do you think that Islamic banks perform better than conventional banks?
That's why we decided to speak about Islamic banks and conventional ones in Tunisia. Our topic is very important for you as Business students to develop your knowledge and understanding of Islamic and Conventional financial sector.The aim of our presentation is to highlight the main and core similarities and dissimilarities between Islamic and Conventional banks.
We will focus on three major parts, In the first, part we will try to give you an overview about Islamic banks and Conventional banks. In the next section, we want to explain the similarities between them. In the last part, we would like to clear the basic differences of these banks. Our presentation will take 15 mn.
Please stop us if you don't understand anything we say, but could you keep any specific question until we've finished.
Do not worry about taking notes,we will e-mail the presentation to you.
Thank you Green Group, this is better now! There are just a few language mistakes to correct.. Note also that the questions policy should be at the end of the introduction...
Deletebrown group
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon ladies and gentleman,
It's a pleasure to welcome you today . Let me just start by introducing myself .My name is Fatma Letifi and this my colleague Dorsaf Arfa and we are third year business English students.
The topic of today's presentation is about the emergence of Islamic banks in Tunisia .We have chosen this topic because we have noticed that people still have a little bit confusion between Islamic banks and conventional banks . Today's topic is of particular interest to those who don't have a clear idea about the aim of Islamic banks.And by the end of this talk ,you will have an other vision concerning this phenomenon. In our presentation , we will focus on 3 main parts : at the first ,we will define the term of "Islamic banks ". Then ,in th second part,we will talk about the advantages , disadvantages and then obstacles that may face this kind of banks. Moving to the third part, it's mainly about the difference between the Islamic banks and conventional banks .In tis part we will mention the reasons that make people manage to save their money and deposit it in Islamic bank.our presentation will take 20mintues. if you have any question please do not hesitate, we will be able to answer your questions after finishing the presentation.
Many thanks for posting your introduction Brown Group!
DeleteYour introduction includes all the requested parts except the one in which you should explain how you will help the audience to remember the presentation…
There are also a few punctuation and language mistakes to correct…
Keep up the good work!
Blue group:
ReplyDeleteIntissar asfouri
topic : inflation
intoduction:
Good morning , Ladies and Gentlemen.It's pleasure to welcome you today. Let me just start by introducing my self.My name is intissar asfouri i am English Students from the higher Institute of Languages of Gabes (islg) .today i would like to speak about inflation in general and in our country as a topic . my topic deals with a real problem that we face today .the purpose of this presentation is to highlight the disadvantages of this phenomenon . so i have divided my work into three parts. the first part will deals with some important definitions and the negative effects of inflation in the society . second part has to do with inflation in tunisia . the third will be about the costs of expected and unexpected inflation . this presentation will take about 20 minutes and i will provide everyone here with a copy of the whole explanation by mail ..Please feel free to ask questions at any time .
Thank you for posting your introduction Intissar. It contains all the requested arts, but I think you should reorganize the structure of your talk because they are not arranged in a logical way. I would recommend to talk about inflation in Tunisia in the last part…
DeleteMake also sure that you correct all you typing and language mistakes… Keep up the good work!
Golden Group
ReplyDeletegood morning ladies and gentelmen , we are happy that you could make it today at such short notice for those of you who don’t know us , we are Bassem Ben abdallah , Imen benali , Hafsia Smiti , Fatma saadallah and Mouna soui . we are third year appliyed english students in ( ISLG) . SO , we would like to start with our presentation right away . As you can see on the screen , our topic today is about online payment , the topic we chose is very interesting for you because online payments can be much easier and faster than offline payment . the purpose of this presentation is to involve online payment in the tunisian economy . we have divided our presentaion into three parts : the first will deal with : The Advantages of Online Processing . the second the disadvantages of online payment . and the third part will be about online payment and its use in tunisia . our talk should take about munits please feel free to interrupt us at any time with questions .
Thank you for your introduction Golden Group!
DeleteIt contains nearly all the required parts except that you have not said how you will help your audience to remember your presentation.
Moreover, I don’t understand the purpose of your presentation, please reword your sentence…
Finally, please make sure that you correct all your spelling and language mistake…
Mouna Souie
ReplyDeleteGood Morning, ladies and gentlemen ! It is my pleasure to present here before you today . My name is Mouna and i am a third year Applied English student from the higher institute of languages of gabes (ISLG). My presentation is revolving around Online Business specifically about Making Money Online and how it can be ideal and beneficial even for the average person in tunisia. And therefor it will be devided into three main parts : the first is introducing the gaining of money through Internet. In the second, i will indicate the ways and methods of how to earn money online.Then finally, i will closure the middle of the presentation with talking about how could this business be helpful nowadays in tunisia. My talk will not take too much of your time i assure you that, and i will answer your questions gladly at the end ofcourse.
Thank you for posting your presentation Mouna.
DeleteThere are a few parts missing in your introduction: you should explain why the topic is relevant for the audience and stating the purpose of the presentation.
I cannot see the difference between part 1 and part 2, be more explicit please…
How will you help the audience to remember your presentation?
Finally, correct your spelling and language mistakes in order to improve your work.
purpel group:good morning, ladies and gentelmen.let me just start by introducing my group .we are samia khelifi,marwa ben hamedand imen ben mahmoud.we are in third year buisness english.it's pleasure to welcome you today.our topic presentation is about the centerl bank in tunisisia.we have divided our presentation into three parts. first of all, we will give you an over view about the centrel bank in tunisia .second , we will talk about the differents tasks into it.as afinal point we would like to disscussthe diffeculties that central bank faces.my talk about 25 minutes.please feel free to interrupt me at any time with questions.
DeleteThank you for your introduction Purple Group!
DeleteMake sure you explain why the topic is relevant for the audience and you should also state the purpose of the presentation. Moreover, what about the way you will help the audience to remember your presentation?
Finally, there are many language and spelling mistakes, so make sure you correct them please.
Green group
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon Ladies and Gentleman. It's a pleasure to meet you all here today, we appreciate your presence. Let us introduce ourselves, we are Ines Assadi, Sondes Agerbi, Abir Bongui and Fatma Rezgui third year Business English Students from the higher Institute of Languages of Gabes.
We decided to speak about Islamic banks and conventional ones in Tunisia. Our topic is very important for you as Business students. As it will help you develop your knowledge and understanding in the Islamic and Conventional financial sector. The aim of our presentation is to highlight the main similarities and dissimilarities between Islamic and Conventional banks.
We will focus on three major parts. In the first part we will try to give you an overview about Islamic banks and Conventional banks. In the next section, we want to explain the similarities between them. In the last part, we would like to show the differences of these banks. Our presentation will take 15 minutes.
Feel free to ask if you don't understand anything we say, but could you keep any specific question until we've finished.
Do not worry about taking notes, we will e-mail the presentation to you.
Thank you for your conscientious work Green Group!!!
DeleteMouna Souie
ReplyDeleteGood Morning, ladies and gentlemen ! It is my pleasure to present here before you today . My name is Mouna and i am a third year Applied English student from the higher institute of languages of gabes (ISLG). Today i give an overview about making money through Internet. This topic is important for anyone who would earn more income and get ahead financially. The purpose of this presentation is to inform more about this concept and realize the potential of it. And therefor it will be devided into two main parts : the first is introducing the gaining of money through Internet and indicating the ways and methods applied.Then finally, i will tie it with a closure by talking about how could this business be helpful nowadays in tunisia even for the average person . My talk will not take too much of your time i assure you that.I will provide you with the content of this presentation by e-mail and i will answer your questions gladly at the end ofcourse.
red group
ReplyDeletesecond try
Good morning everyone. It's a pleasure to meet you today. Let us introduce ourselves. We are Mabrouka Bey and Siwar Bel Haj Yahya. Today, w'll be talking about financing small businesses in tunisia. As we know, our country is suffering from economic crisis so the state is unable to offer job opportunities. That's why we ,as students, should think about enterpreneurship. And one of the most important steps of starting a new business is financing. The perpose of our presentation is to make you aware about the importance of this stage. Our presentation is devided into three parts. W'll start by presenting the types of financing, then w'll move to difficulties of financing in Tunisia and w'll end by talking about the facilities of financing small businesses in our country. Our presentation will take about 15 minutes. If you have have any questions you can ask us after we end.
Golden Group
ReplyDeletesecond try :
topic : online payment
good morning ladies and gentelmen , we are happy that you could make it today at such short notice for those of you who don’t know us , we are Bassem Ben abdallah , Imen benali , Hafsia Smiti , Fatma saadallah and Mouna soui . we are third year appliyed english students in ( ISLG) . SO , we would like to start with our presentation right away . As you can see on the screen , our topic today is about online payment , the topic we chose is very interesting for you because online payments can be much easier and faster than offline payment . the purpose of this presentation is to involve online payment in the tunisian economy .the goal of this presentation is to highlight the advantages and disadvantages of the online payment . we have divided our presentaion into three parts : the first will deal with : The Advantages of Online Processing . the second the disadvantages of online payment . and the third part will be about online payment and its use in tunisia . our talk should take about munits please feel free to interrupt us at any time with questions .
Green group
ReplyDeleteending
conclusion: well that 's all we want to say about islamic and conventional banks. let us sum up what we have already seen together we started by the overview of these banks moving to the similarities between them, and finish by the differences of these banks . thank you extremely for your attention and i'm willing to answer any questions, comments....
Purple Group
ReplyDeleteGood morning ladies and gentelment, its a pleasure to welcome you today .let us first start by introducing ourselves;we belong to 3rd year applied english group ;Yosra and Ahmed and Ahmed Ammar .
The topic of our presentation is Urban Exodus .Our topic is very important for you because urbanization is a significant phenomenon that has a direct impacts on the environement.
the aim of this presentation is to focus on the urban exodus as an environmental issue .
we have divided our presentation into three main parts .we will begin by causes of urban exodus,then we will move into the Effects and we will end with consequences .
All of the presentation should take at around 20 minutes ,Don't worry about taking notes .we have put all the important data on a handout for you .
After we finishing our talk there will be time for Discussion and questions.
Is Urban Exodus has an impact on environment ?
If yes ,what are the consequences then ?
what are the main causes behind urbanization ?