THE ENDING
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- Ending
the main body of the presentation
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ReplyDeleteWhite group
ReplyDeletewell, that's all about our presentation , to smmarize let me go back to the main factors that will help developing the emergence of online payement of tunisia ... and we mentioned the beneficial influence of online bill payement in Tunisia. As result, we recommend everyone to use it more often . Thank you alll for your attention feel free now to ask any questions and we welcome your comments , recommendation and suggestion.
( we will come back to "the ending" after we finish the body of our presentation in order to develop the summary a little bit more )
Thank you White Group! Yes, I guess it will be easier for you to complete your ending when you know exactly the content of your presentation...
ReplyDeleteWell this bring us to the end of our presentation so let us go throught the main points again which how effective was the experience of Mohamed Yunus with Grameen bank in Bengladesh and in the world unlike what Tunisian goverment did to decrease poverty and joblesness and as final point we suggest to look deeply into our proposal to create a bank that provide loans with small interst and under certain conditions that could solve many problems including early dropout of school ,child labour ,marriage of adolescent girls, etc ..Therfore your recommendations and suggestions will be useful to may implement this project in Tunisia Thank you all for your attention
ReplyDeleteThank you for your ending Silver group! We can clearly see that it includes 3 out of the 4 required parts, but you definitely need to add some punctuation and to correct your spelling or typing mistakes…
ReplyDeletePlease improve your summary because it lacks clarity… In what ways was Mohamed Yunus’ experience effective?
Finally, you need to invite the audience to ask questions…
after all, we want to state what we found and what we noticed from this topic.this topic was about the centrel bank in tunisia .at first we identify the centerl bank wich lead us to know more about his organisation charts ,branches and taskes.also the difficulties that he faces during 2012 to 2015 that may influence to the other banks in tunisia .purpel group
ReplyDeleteThank you Purple group for posting your ending...
ReplyDeleteDo not forget that you should first signal that this is the en dof your presentation.
Then , in your summary state explicitly what you want people to remember from your presentation, do not just repeat the structure of your presentation.
I cannot see any conclusion here....
Finally, you have not invited the audience to ask their questions.
So please, focus on the structure to improve your ending.
It really gives me an insight on this topic.
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Mouna Souie
ReplyDeleteAnd now as a closure for my presentation i would summarize you the main points which are the introduction for making money online concept and its recommended legitimate ways... . thank you all for your attention and time , please be free to ask any questions ; i will gladly welcome your recommendations and comments.
Golden group :
ReplyDeletethe end : 1st try :)
topic : online payment
That concludes our presentation. Now, if we can just summarise the main points wich are about the positive and negative side of online payment . we can say that online payment is very important this days because it make our life much easier ! so we like you to get a clear informations about it , and this is the main point of our presentation . That brings us to the end of our presentation , If anyone has any questions, please feel free to ask them now . thank you !