Dear students,
Now that you have chosen your topic, which is related to work in Tunisia, you can write your introduction and post it below.
You can find a reminder of the different parts of an introduction HERE
Do not forget to indicate which group you belong to.
To post your introduction, just click on 'Comments' and write your text in the box.
Golden groupe:
ReplyDeleteHello everyone,it's a pleasure to welcome you today.for those of you who don't know us,we are the golden groupe ,we are 3rd year business english students in the higher institut of languages in gabes.
While watching the news,they dealt with the issue of unemployment in tunisia.we were chocked by its high rate ,that's why we are going to discuss this problem in our presentation because we think that it is a dangerous fact that might affect all of us . So we are aiming at sensitizing everyone about its sides effects.our presentation is devided into 3 parts : first of all we are going to study how unemployment affects tunisian citizens and economy.after that,we are going to deal with the reasons behind this phenomenon, and finally ,we are going to suggest some solutions in order to decrease this problem.our talk should take about 20 minutes .dont worry about taking notes,we will be handling out copies of the power point slides.after our talk there will be time for a discussing and any questions.
Good work Golden Group!! You just need to correct a few spelling mistakes...
Delete{ATO GROUP}
ReplyDeleteHello everybody,many greetings to you.For those who don't know us,we are the ATO group,3rd year business English students at ISLG.As you can see on the screen,our topic today deals with motivating staff.Our talk is particularly relevant to those of you who are interested in this field.The purpose of this presentation is to show you how important motivating staff is,and how it affects the psycological side of employees as same as the profit.We will focus on the reasons and the results and all the presentation will take about 15 minutes.Don't worry about taking notes,we have put all the important information on a handout for you.So feel free to ask questions at any time during our talk.
Thanks a lot for posting the beginning of your presentation. First, I would advise you to use one of the devices we have used in class to attract the audience’s attention. Second, could you clarify what the three parts of your presentation are, as I can see only two of them ?
DeleteGroup:
ReplyDeletegood morning ladies and gentlemen,firs of all let me thank you all for being here today Im glad that many of you could come.For those who don't know us,we are the violet group;3rd year applied English at the higher institut of languages in gabes. We will start by asking you a question:suppose you want to open a new company,how would be the plan for working wonditon?. As you can see on the screen our presentation is about working conditions;it is divided into three parts: First of all we will start with the workers views on working conditions,second part is about their satisfaction and dissatisfaction and we will finish with the sollutions suggested to satisfy workers.This presentation is extremely important for all of business owners who want to be successful leader.Our role will take about 20 minutes we will appreciate if you don't interrupt us. Don't worry about taking notes everything is on the handout.
Thanks a lot for posting your work, Violet Group ! Let me give you some advice to improve it. First of all, try to clarify the rhetorical question, as I cannot see the link between starting a business and working conditions. Second, you have forgotten to explain why this presentation is relevant for your audience and what its objective is. Check your spelling and langage too !
DeleteHello everyone , it's good to see you all here . Let us just start by introducing ourselves . We are the members of the burgandy group of third year Business English . Suppose you are a working mother, would you be happy with your working conditions ? . Today we are going to talk about working mothers in Tunisia . Our topic is very important for you because most of you ( if not all ) will be working mothers in the future , so you can all relate to it .The purpose of this presentation is to raise awarness about the importance of working mothers in society . During our presentation we will focus on three major parts :
ReplyDeleteFirst, we will begin by stating the problems that can get in the way of working mothers . Then we will move on to the affects of working mothers on society . And we will end it with some solutions to adapt work to make it easier for mothers in Tunisia . It should take about 20 minutes .We will e-mail the presentation to you by the end of the day so you dont have to worry about taking notes . Finally there will be time for questions after the presentation .
Thanks for posting your introduction Burgandy Group ! You have tried to provide a rhetorical question to introduce your topic but it is too general, you can improve it…. Please check your spelling too...
Deletethe green group:
ReplyDeleteHi everyone, first of all let us thank you all for coming here, we are so pleased to welcome you today. Let us just start by introducing ourselves, we are monya, raja and oumayma, as some of you know we are third year applied english in ISLG . We would like to present a crucial issue in Tunisia. Let us take few minutes and imagine together that we are workers in a tunisian companies that looks only for profits at the expense of its employees, how would you behave then ? This is an important topic for all of us not only because we are studying business english but also because we're going to be workers one day and we need to know every mino details about the world economy with all its parts . One of them is motivating employees which is hardly to find in some tunisian companies . Thereby, in our topic, we're going to inform you about how tunisian workers should be motivated to become one of the strength points in the company . That's why we'll start with introducing the importance of employees in the company as the first part of the topic, then we'll specify our work by focusing on some various miserable cases that may face the tunisian worker and by the end we'll finish with enumerating different methods of motivating tunisian workers and satisfy them . This presentation will take about 15 minutes and don't worry about taking notes, we've put all the important data on a handout for you . We'll be pleased to answer any question or explain any blurry part of the topic by the end of our talk .
Thanks for posting your introduction ! All the parts are included in your work, so you just need to check your spelling and language… Keep up the good work !
DeleteThe Red group :
ReplyDeleteHello everyone, we are glad to welcome you today. As you probably know , we are the Red group; 3rd year Business English students in the higher institut of languages of Gabes .
Today , we would like to update you on the current status of youth unemployment in Tunisia .
This topic will be extremely important for all of us, who are waiting to graduate from university and we should be aware of this widespread issue .
So , we have devided our presentation into three main parts. we will start by showing you some statistics to deal with the main causes behind the problem of youth unemployment in the Tunisian society . Then , we will move on to see if students graduated from private universities are facing the same problem and in this context we will present for you some interviews . And finally, we will end with some solutions in order to reduce this problem and we are going to see also the role of government in such problems.
Our talk should take about 20minutes . Please feel free to interrupt us at any time with questions .
Thanks for posting your introduction, Red Group.
DeleteYou can improve it by adding a device to attract the audience’s attention. Moreover, what is the objective of your presentation ? And how will you help your audience to remember your presentation ?
Finally, don’t forget to check your spelling and language...