Ending
Now that you have posted the introduction to your presentation, you can write the ending and post it here (just click on 'comments' below and type in your text). Please remember that the conclusion should include the following parts:
- Ending the main body of the presentation
- Summary of the main points of your presentation (what you want the audience to remember)
- Conclusion
- Inviting questions
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Green group:
ReplyDeleteWell this brings us to the end of our presentation . Let us just run through the main points again . We've talked about the importance of human resource in the development of any company , then we were specified to talk about Tunisian workers and the miserable conditions they face at work . finally , we finished with the third point wich includes different methods to motivate these workers to be one of the strength points for any Tunisian companies . So that's the plan , it looks shiny with a lot of hope by the end of the body , but is it possible to put it into practice ?! especially that nowadays each company is lookinf for good reputation and earnings at any cost , sometimes even at the expense of consumers so how can this project be implied in a world of profitability ?!! Or maybe it's better to ask if the blame is only on companies or even workers who cannot strive to get their rights ?!! Is this problem found only in tunisia or maybe other coutries face the worse ?!! A lot of questions that need to be attentive to them .... Ok , that's all for our presentation , so now we would be very interested to hear your comments .
Thanks for posting your ending Green group! Please check your spelling first... Then, instead of just restating what each part is about, it would be better to summarize what you want the audience to remember in each part...
Delete*Burgandy group*
ReplyDeleteWell , this brings us to end of our presentation. If i may briefly summarize the main points ; We delt with the challenges that can face working mothers , then we moved on to the benefits and role of working mothers in society , and lastly , their impact and contribution on profitability and productivity for their companies . I would like to finish with something A.Theodore Tuttle once said ' Before you count the profit , count the cost of a working mother ' . Alright , now we will be happy to answer any questions you may have .
Thanks for posting your ending Burgandy group! Please check your spelling first... Then, instead of just restating what each part is about, it would be better to summarize what you want the audience to remember in each part, e.g. what are the main challenges faced by mother? I can't see any conclusion either....
DeleteGolden group
ReplyDeleteRight that end the third part of our talk.we would like to finish with the summary of the main parts . First we focused on the tunisien's citizens and economy that were affected by the high rates of unemployment and then we dealt with the main reasons behind this phenomenen and finally we suggested some relevant solutions. What we need is to sensitize everyone about how dangerous unemployement is not only in present but also in the futur. So now we would be very interested to hear your comments .
Thanks for posting your ending Golden group! Please check your spelling first... Then, instead of just restating what each part is about, it would be better to summarize what you want the audience to remember in each part, e.g. what are the solutions you suggested? How will you make people more aware of the dangers of unemployment?
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